Magic Box
Once a time there was a village (Champaran ) . In champaran a big box came. everyone shock who will book this box . someone peoples (Ramu , Mamu ,Kalu ) was shocking. what will inside in this box.
After few days a magichion (Rangella ) came and announced a big show 'Magic box' is organizing on12 october,2020.
Book your tickets in advanced
100Rs/ person
Peoples have booked there tickets.
Come in village big ground . a big box will be opening.
Win some exiciting prices.
Cash
Toys
Books & Stationary
Gold
Enjoy & Singing will also there .
On the day of show peoples came in ground and wait for opened a box.
magician was not coming.
peoples didn't waiting
When they opened a box , are you all imagine what out in this box ?
A MOUSE
Mukul your story is good but your spellings are wrong somewhere. And also I found errors on sentences structure. Pls do work upon them.
ReplyDeleteOk thank you , I also found , I don't have time to re read my story that why
Deletebut, next time i understood this thinks.
Ok , Thank you so much , next time , I work on it.
ReplyDeleteWell tried, Mukul! You story is fabulous, but few points were missing like climax and resolution.
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